UV Sensors

Ultra Violet Sensors

     The animal sensor that I think is the most fascinating is the U.V. sensors. Incredibly, animals with U.V. sensors see ultraviolet light. Humans can’t see ultraviolet light but bees and a few other animals can. Bees use the ultraviolet light to assist them in finding flowers.  U.V. sensors are remarkable.

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The animal sensor I think is interesting is U.V. sensors. U.V. is ultraviolet is part of light. Humans can’t see ultraviolet but bees can. Bees use it to find flowers.  U.V. sensors are amazing.

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The animal sensor that I think is the most is interesting is U.V. sensors. Animals with U.V. sensors see ultraviolet light. Humans can’t see ultraviolet light but bees can. Bees use the ultraviolet light to assist them in finding flowers.  U.V. sensors are remarkable.

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The animal sensor that I think is the most fascinating is the U.V. sensors. Incredibly Animals with U.V. sensors see ultraviolet light. Humans can’t see ultraviolet light but bees and a few other animals can. Bees use the ultraviolet light to assist them in finding flowers.  U.V. sensors are remarkable.

Thankful

I am thankful for my friends and family. I am thankful for my broken arm being healed . I am thankful for clean water.  God is Almighty, loving and the King of Kings.  Lovingly, he gives us everything we need.

Every good and perfect gift is from above, coming down from the Father of the heavenly lights, who does not change like shifting shadows.

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After

David

David was courageous and brave because he stood up to Goliath. He went  to the battlegrounds to give his brothers lunch and saw goliath. David went to the king and got armour but did not need the armour.  David took some stones from the near by river and  threw one and Goliath tumbled down.  David was brave because of God.

Then David said to the Philistine, “You come to me with a sword and with a spear and with a javelin, but I come to you in the name of the Lord of hosts, the God of the armies of Israel, whom you have defied. 

Gold Rush

Gold Rush

The gold rush was discovered in 1858 at Hills Bar. Sometimes miners killed other miners to steal their gold and come by riches.  Greedily, they bet to obtain more gold. They travelled the harsh weather and advanced from all over.  Some people came from Victoria on the S.S. Beaver and then walked or sat on horses all the way to Williams Creek.  It was a time of confusion and greed.